feature; murree by mehak anwer

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Mehak Anwar

BS Part 3 

If Murre is the queen of Hills, Then gorakh hill sindh's highest point which is often compared to that verdant hill station in north of pakistan, is a lonely, majestic king. Located in Dadu district at a height of 5,688 feet in the kirthar range, at the border of Sindh and Blochistan. Gorakhs elevation gives it a special climate, with sub-zero temperature during winter and generally below 20•c in summer, with about 120mm of average annual rainfall.

The Moutain hues are stunning. there are grey, ochre, brown and a speckle of green here and there. The nature Sculptures, fashioned by wind and water no doubt that is a sight to behold. Ther sights are one climed up the hill were indeed something for sore eyes.

At night, a canopy of stars are visible in the clear sky above-more stars than one could count. Whats is more, the silence was all-encompassinh while the air was crisp and cool. While the wheather in Dadu and Johi below are pleasent, on Gorakh hill it is absolutely nippy. And as the sun came down, the cold started to bite so June-july is the best time to visit.

However on Gorakh Hill there is only Silence.